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A new animation I am working on. Its not complete. My goal is for the final version to be 10-15 seconds long and to finish the same way it began.

How should this continue?
Give me some ideas and I will pick the best one and finish the animation with it.
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Oljum Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2014  Hobbyist
I'm always impressed when I see giant robots or such robot alike armor- I always think how much work it need. Especially when I see so much details alike in your work-all of elements, cable, bolts.
To make such smootly working scene you must needed a lot of effort. Congratulation! It was worth it
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zoomzoom Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
did u see the finished version of this work?
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Oljum Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2014  Hobbyist
Propably bit yet ^^;
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D0MINIKKU Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2014
amazing
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MrRobotov Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Excellent. :D
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:iconzoomzoom:
zoomzoom Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
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MrRobotov Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Good job. :)
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Berjj Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2012
I would like to see the big robot turning around to shoot at the little guy who responds by jumping on top of the big robot. The big robot (I remember it was in robocop but can't seem to recall it's name) starts spinning around in circles in an attempt to find out where the smaller guy landed (Or possibly in an attempt to shake him off). This would show off the back of the model nicely and add more depth to the animation. The little guy then responds by ripping out a cable off the back of the robot, thus disabling it.
Nice and smooth animation thus far, but I noticed some pieces overlapping on the big robot's right foot as it turns around.

Hmm, after I was done writing this whole thing I noticed how old this deviation was. Oh well, I guess you've moved on from this piece by now. :p
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zoomzoom Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
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BamBam6917 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2012
i know how it should end red just got scared by ED's appearence looking over him so he calms down and goes around him and they make up and red goes back to the stance he was in at the beginning. simple as that.
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zoomzoom Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
finished it zoomzoom.deviantart.com/art/RO...
Thoughts?
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BamBam6917 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013
awesome
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donstock Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2011
it should go like this:
ED should start firing, and red should start rolling on the ground avoiding the bullets
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zoomzoom Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
it has to end the same way it began. that's the challenge...
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DrFreeman117 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2011
Ok that is epic, and is the robot ED209. also the gun the other robot, is the one from aliens.
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zoomzoom Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Its cool that you can tell...
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DrFreeman117 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2011
ya
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zoomzoom Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
finished it zoomzoom.deviantart.com/art/RO...
Thoughts?
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HarradaRoot Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2011
It looks a bit like the ED 209 from Robocop.

"YOU ARE TRESSPASSING ON POLICE PROPERTY. YOU HAVE MUST EXIT. YOU HAVE 20 SECONDS TO COMPLY."
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zoomzoom Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
a bit? its identical copy....
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johnbecaro Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
this is awesome!
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surthur Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
mecha jumps in the air , zoom in, guy stands around wondering where he is, mech sneaks behind him, pause, begin again or something like that ? o-o hard to make a loop out of it, since mech stands around at the beginning. hm maybe just another similar mech stands behind the guy, with a fade in ?
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zoomzoom Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
finished it zoomzoom.deviantart.com/art/RO...
Thoughts?
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zoomzoom Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
hmm.. as I was reading ur post, I thought of maybe an elevator like platform can bring another robot from under the ground as the small robot gets back up. and then it loops, so he just keep rolling back robots pop from under the ground or it just happened to be there like u said. its the better idea I had so far!
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Colourbrand Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ah! The classic ED-209! beautifully rendered here - just wonder what the remake version will be like - probably hideous...probably.

This is rather sweet! Well done!
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zoomzoom Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
I have faith in the 3D artist working on the new one! I think it would be great!!
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Minareadjin Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Yeah , who care about Robocop?I have nemamed my vhs with "ED-209 Movie" XD
ED-209 Rulez
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zoomzoom Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
i don't get your comment....
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Minareadjin Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
I just love the Mecha with 2 vulcan :P (ED-209)
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NyahKitty Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Either have Ed lose it's balance and fall backwards onto Red...
.. or have a secret rear panel open to reveal a hurkin' big ordinance that blasts Red into a smoldering crater. :-)
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NyahKitty Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
If Ed were to fall down and squash Red .. then just have Ed get back up after that and sneak up behind another copy of Red.
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zoomzoom Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
finished it zoomzoom.deviantart.com/art/RO...
Thoughts?
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AlexH-01 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD my computer is crap, it only runs at 0.5 FPS for me!
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zoomzoom Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
too bad...
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Deborah-Valentine Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
in the mid 90's I went to Phil Tippett studio and watched their artists work on Ed 209. it was wonderful.
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TuApUi Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2011
watch for the clipping on the right foot!

awesome stuff. would be better with some anticipation.

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zoomzoom Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
aware of it... thanks..
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TuApUi Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2011
:)
sorry for being naggy :D

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Poopgoblyn Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2011
I'm more impressed with the mechanical animation of the big bipedal machine dude, the antagonist I suppose than I am with the robot guy who is sliding.
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zoomzoom Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
probably coz its not something you see everyday... but from the technical stand point, red robot guy was a lot harder to animate as he does full turn around, dive, turn in the air and lend...

"big bipedal machine dude" is Ed209 from the movie Robocop
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WolfGriffin Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2011  Professional General Artist
Awesome
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Babaika Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2011
AWESOME!! :la:
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emaciate Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2011  Professional Filmographer
oooooooooommggggg
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boznic Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2010
I love that model, and these animations are always a lot of fun.
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:iconzoomzoom:
zoomzoom Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
this reminds me... i got to finish it.
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3Ninja Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2010
nice
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:icon3ihard:
3ihard Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2010   Digital Artist
круто блин!
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:iconzoomzoom:
zoomzoom Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
finished it zoomzoom.deviantart.com/art/RO...
Thoughts?
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RetroDevil Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
awesome anim. look forward to see how it ends. I have a feeling Ed-209 is screwed LOL
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zoomzoom Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
finished it zoomzoom.deviantart.com/art/RO...
Thoughts?
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