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Ok. I need your opinions here. This is part of my new demo reel. Last year, I worked on this track for work. it was a test wii track. now i am trying to feature it on my new reel. the problem is... i don't have any actual game footage, so i am animating vehicles right in maya.. so animation is hand made. not from a game footage. need to know what needs changes. need to know ur opinions.
p.s. final version will be with sound.
p.s. final version will be with sound.
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Overall Vision Originality Technique ImpactOkay...couldn't stop watching it...I think the Porsche looks good for the most part...the Veyron, something looks odd about it...here is what I think it may be:
Notice the Porsche slides outwards as it drifts around the corner....slides across a lane of traffic which helps makes the physics believable because it gives a sense of the weight of the vehicle...
The Veyron, when it slides around the corner appears to be headed in the opposite direction of which way it should be going if the vehicle is "sliding" around a corner. Veyrons, as you are probably well aware of, are relatively heavy vehicles. Maybe don't have the counter turn at the very beginning and pick a straighter line of action until the Veyron turns and think about the difference in the distance between the vehicles. I think the "gap" may be more consistent between the two vehicles to give a more believable sense of racing at high speeds.
I hope this helps some and feel free to let me know if this helps or not. I feel you are definitely on the right track, no pun intended, lol, and I know this is not the final version. Look forward to seeing the final. Take care. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="
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